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i choose my prison
it makes me quite safe
safe snug in this little shell
it's too little

my cell is warm
full of pillows
it's stifiling

my mask is stuck
the key is locked

the sentence is forever
what did i do to deserve this never ending penalty


unless
unless i escape there's a spoon in here
and the floor is made of sand

but the floor is hard and the spoon so small
when will i get out of here

i'll need help
friends and lovers
thier few and far apart

but i'll get out
someday
someday it'll be done
someday i'll be free

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Written July 18th, 2002

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  • mysticcannibal
    August 4, 2002
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    excellent

    DIG WOMAN DIG!!!!
    get out of that room and be free FREEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEE

  • neko6
    July 19, 2002
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    don't touch it!

    mm, hope is good, but only when you know what lies ahead.