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rational

Why keep those feet
ever planted on the ground
unless that is you want to be
does it make you safe

why not it keeps you out of harms way
to much originality has often proven to be fatal
so what if you're baby content
in your reality world
simple
simple like a drone
following orders an automaton

i'm out there i live
i breathe i think
and sometimes it hurts
but at least i feel

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Written July 18th, 2002

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  • mysticcannibal
    August 4, 2002
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    excellent

    goodness in a half pint sized Squee

  • neko6
    July 18, 2002
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    don't touch it!

    sometimes staying in one place too long, you forget what 'moving' is. i love the last four lines. (^_^)