You put the sweet into sweetheart
And promised you always will
My dear you play a precious part
You put the sweet into sweetheart
Entwined we found love from the start
And our dreams we hope to fulfill
You put the sweet into sweetheart
And promised you always will
Author notes
Thanks for reading us! -Tim Jr. & Timothy
Written October 15th, 2004
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Aww This is a wonderful collaboration, I see your beautiful son has inherited your charismatic charm. Tender penning, deeply touching, well done, both of you.
Bella
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Very Lovely
Your poem dear Timothy is as beautiful as a song. The image I'm sure is the adorable little Tim and his sweetheart. They make an extremely cute couple. May God continue to bless them both.
Thanks for sharing this lovely poem and your beautiful portrait.
Avril
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Beautiful!!
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how old are they...jw?
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This is a very cute and adoorable poem. Tell him i said good write and the girl is very lucky to have someone care so much for her! Has she read the poem? Well anways comment back! Good write again and again!
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Adorable and what beautiful children~
Wooooooo hooooooooooo
Your son did a fine job on this piece and I bet his girlfriend was grinning from ear to ear~
Loved it~
Wish them much happiness
and much love~Desire
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From the heart
Very sweet piece of love and caring very nice
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Awwww -- that is an amazing poem. It's so sweet and filled with love . . . :-D
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aww he doesn't old enough to have a girl friend lol I think that this is a beautiful poem... Looks like he has his dads talent for writing eh?
Natalia -
Excellent
This is a beautiful piece, full of so much love and hope. The portrayal of such sweet emotion brought a smile upon my face. The repitition of "You put the sweet into sweetheart" is so very adorable
Thanks for the share, Tim.
Kate
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This is such a sweet poem you have written for this lucky girl. Excellent work Tim, You heart rings clear here.
I really enjoyed reading you as i always do.
Take care,
Tammy
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awww.. this is just a cute piece i love it!
....good picture! lol
love ya
magicalprincess
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aww now how sweet it that how adorable
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Really sweet
Aww this was so very sweet. Short but says so much. I agree sounds like you have raised a good son. Very nicely done! Alexis
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Ahh that is so sweet. You raised a good son it sounds like.
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this poem is very sweet and it short but gets to the point but its really good
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AW this is cute! lol ... i wish i could same the same about my sweetheart ... hehe .. nice job .. eeep it up mini-timmy
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oh...this is precious...lol...young love was so much fun...innocent... Beautiful piece, good work!
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8 T's
aw that's sooo sweet...i just hope for his and her sake that they aren't dating too young. I really enjoyed this and i think it's so sweet....much peace! -
awww very sweet. Nice little write for a such a sweet love..young love is so sweet.
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