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My Blessing

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My love, my wife, you are my blessing
The one who makes my every day
I love to embrace your waist while resting
My love, my wife, you are my blessing

Though through life there's been some testing
And love has tried to slip away
My love, my wife, you are my blessing
The one who makes my every day


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To my honey~

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  • oldphotosonlybringt
    February 20, 2008

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    aww..
    this is too sweet
    i love it and it is very nice pic of you 2!
    this is very sweet dad really,
    i bet she loved it when she first read it!!!
    your so amazing, love bunches

  • Aurora Ceres
    August 5, 2007

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    How blessed you must be to have a love so enduring one that stands the tests of time and tribulations. This is fabulous, Timothy. I like the repetition of lines 1, 4 and 7. Such a loving and soulful pen you have.

    Ash


  • Diamond
    October 21, 2004
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    Great Within

    AWWWW Timothy, you guys are so sweet together. She is so very lovely and you are handsome. The love between you both just radiates on your faces. AWWWW God bless you both and may you continue to love and cherish each other forever. I hope that Darell and I are fortunate enough to have a love such as yours. Wishing you all the best.

    All my love,

    Your loving Sis


  • Araina
    October 15, 2004
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    Oh, this was so sweet; makes me wish I weren't single again. Beautifully endearing, I must now go out and find someone who will write poetry for me. *laughs*


  • IAmTrace
    October 15, 2004
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    8 T's

    so good, heart felt and i hope you two are together forever...i know that if a guy wrote poetry for me...i would stay with him..until the prose stopped! lol jk...i'd prolly be with him forever! awesome write


  • Nicola
    October 15, 2004
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    really good

    this is really gd awesome poem and it good you are keeping on to each other love because we dont want another statisic and you are to great as a couple as one to be nothing else! and its great that ou can write these emotions down! have many more times fun in love and love her with all your heart as i know you will keep up the gd work love nicola


  • BeautifulContradiction
    October 15, 2004
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    Awwwww!
    How long have you been hitched?

  • starlight00
    October 15, 2004
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    this poem is truly beautiful and nice pic! Hope you get everything you ever want from your wife and family - nice poem - well done!
    esme xxxx


  • Sunkissedrose
    October 15, 2004
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    Seems things are looking up in Tim's world, eh? Such a beautiful picture, and such a beautiful family. I am glad that things are finally going as they should for you. Excellent write of love.
    Carrie


  • Sharon Corr gold member
    October 15, 2004
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    This is how love should be Timothy I am so happy for both of you.
    Fall in love all over again with the one you love and married.
    This is the way love should be. Namaste Blessed Be.
    Love can be found and reawaken you’ve both found yourselves born anew.
    This is one beautifully penned love song within a valentine. A loving tribute to your life and your wife.


  • Dreamweaver silver member
    October 15, 2004
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    Excellent

    Short and very sweet Timothy without being over gushy with nonsequencial phrases. A beautiful dedication to a beautiful lady. May the joys of love be forever in both your hearts.
    Sammy


  • Whispering Winds
    October 15, 2004
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    Timothy,
    This is so sweet. I love the pic...Love IS Grand...
    Thanks for sharing is with us.
    Take care, and much love to you both
    Tammy


  • cutiepie gold member
    October 15, 2004
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    touching

    Ah, such a gentle tribute for your wife, Im sure she will adore it.

  • lgodina
    October 15, 2004
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    Every man should appreciate his wife as much as you do yours. You are really blessed. Don't take it for granted for it will come to ruin. Treat everyday as a precious gift from GOD. I know what I am talking about. MAY GOD BLESS YOU BOTH AND TAKE CARE OF YOU WHEN THE OTHER CAN'T BE AROUND.

    GOD BLESS

    LAURA


  • UnchartedPoet
    October 15, 2004
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    Special

    This is a very thoughtful piece to your wife. It is hard to find now days someone who truely thinks of themselves blessed by another person being in their lives and to write just something sweet and to the point. Very nicely done.

  • Rainbow56
    October 15, 2004
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    Thoughtful

    This poem is truly a sweetest day card,
    just in time for tommorrow celebration
    better then a box of chocolate's something
    that will last forever.

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