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Poison

[Chorus]
The air is poison,
But I feel fine.
Where is our fucking Christ?
Hold, Rewind, then come undone.
You cut. You bleed. You die. That's life.

[Verse I]
Politics, Society,
Bullshit we call life.
Death, Disease,
And a sharp pocket knife.

Slice it, Dice it,
Serve it up fresh.
Society's Bitch,
Carved out of your flesh.

[Bridge]
We're fucked,
But it's all in our heads...

[Chorus]

[Verse II]
Silence is affecting you,
Messing with your head.
Darkness is consuming you,
Leaving you for dead.

Hope, a fancy word for want,
Hanging from a hollow noose
Money fills your mouth,
You have no use.

[Bridge]

[Chorus]

We drink, We drive,
We can't behave.
We live, We die,
We dig our own grave.
We take, We give,
We can't behave.
We bribe, We lie,
We dig our own grave.

[Chorus x 2]

You.
Have.
No.
Use.

Author notes

Erm. Yeah. I've been working on this one for a while, trying to get it write. I like it. Sorta. It's about politics, I suppose. I got my inspiration from everywhere, on this one. Metallica, Tsunami Bomb, Jason... you get the point. Enjoy... I hope.
Written October 15th, 2004

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  • GypsyRoseDancer
    October 18, 2004
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    Ya think so? *snicker* Exactly! So either way, he'll toss it aside and won't listen. *laughs* (School sucks...)


  • Breakmouth
    October 18, 2004
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    Maybe if enough people scream in his ear, then he'll grt the message that "HEY, JASON! YOU DON'T SUCK!"
    Then again, maybe not. He is a guy after all, and we all know how think thier heads are. :-P

  • GypsyRoseDancer
    October 17, 2004
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    You don't think I've tried?! God the entire last few months I dated him I tried. He never really bought it.
    That he does.

  • Breakmouth
    October 16, 2004
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    Jason thinks he's a crap poet? Someone needs to give Jason a good kick up the ass. God, he's got serious talent for it.
    But he does inspire some good stuff.

  • GypsyRoseDancer
    October 15, 2004
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    It's amazing - Jason says he's a horrible poet, ye inspires some pretty riveting stuff! It kinda gives me cold chills (if I wasn't freezing from Archery already).


  • Jadeaurora
    October 15, 2004
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    good

    Sounds awesome sis and i'm sorry? *hugs tight* i know crappy but its the only thing i can say.We're all just going through a messed up time...hopefully it'll get better...still good job on this.


  • Evening-Star
    October 15, 2004
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    Guess we're all pretty upset then...over politics and just over life. Glad (but not) to see that it's not just me... You know the feeling? Of course, you do.

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