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Coffee Please

Coffee please
pour one for me
I need to come alive.

That strong aroma
will shake this coma
that is in my mind.

A cup of Java
thick as lava
in the morning time.

Nice and quiet
no kids to riot
still darkness in the sky.

A steaming mug
for this tired lug
must get to work on time.

Run for the door
slide on the floor
as I turn back around.

Back to the pot
for coffee hot
to fill my travel mug.

Back out the door
I head once more
I needed one more cup.

Author notes

Hi my name is Rob and I'm from Ontario, Canada. My favorite coffee shop is all over Canada. Tim Horton's. They are all alike, friendly, busy and always great coffee. Their drive through is always lined up also. I write everywhere whenever the mood hits, day or night. I swear they put something in their coffee . I know people who get up in the morning and drive there to get their coffee rather than make their own. So that must be saying something right there! Timmy's coffee is like a travelling companion. Just ask any coffee drinking canuck, they will tell you.
Written October 14th, 2004

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  • autumns tears
    November 24, 2006
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    This is so cute!

    I am a new found coffee junkie! I have only been drinking for about two years, but can't get through the day without it! This is a great little coffee contest piece!


  • faderman1959
    October 30, 2006
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    Thank you Ragan!


  • Ragan
    October 30, 2006
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    Sounds like you really like thier coffee. I don't really care for it, buthey. Great poem. I liked it.


  • faderman1959
    June 16, 2006
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    ea I posted in my comment box for you. If you need anything else just let me know.

  • ea silver member
    June 16, 2006
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    This is cute and I enjoyed it but let me see where I am with how many poems I now have included in the manuscript. My reservation is that this may be too similar to others I already have in. In the meantime, please write a coffee story as per the contest notes suggestion in your author's comment box and leave this in the contest until I have had more time to consider everything. Thank you.


  • hoodoolover silver member
    June 16, 2006
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    This is very cute, I like it!


  • Huntress silver member
    November 8, 2004
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    Im more of a diet pepsi junkie. Got to have it everyday. Cute poem

  • Tu Leona
    October 27, 2004
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    Oh, very funny. It reminds me alot of my mother when I loved with her still. Good write.

    ~>Leona<~


  • FlawedDestiny
    October 26, 2004
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    This is so cute. You have the word "quite" I think it should be "quiet" Anyway, good flow, very nice! Thanks so much for reading mine as well!
    ~Destiny~


  • cosmicrose
    October 14, 2004
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    A java junkie.... oh my
    but still my favorite guy
    just don't dare ask me why
    so I won't have ta lie

    LOL... that was such a fun ride...are ya speeding yet?

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