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Letting Go

I will not ever feel the rapture,
I will not cry heart filled tears,
I will not find a love so true,
I will not forget our happy years.

I will not forget our memories,
I will not forget your smile,
I will not forget loves passion,
I will not forget for a while.

I will not stop living my life,
I will not wither and die,
I will not let bitterness win,
I will not have a sad goodbye.

I will not allow angry words,
I will not succumb to my fears,
I will not become a weakling,
I will not hides my sad tears.

I will not forget you loved me,
I will not forget that sad day,
I will not forget the day you died,
I will not forget God took you away.

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Written October 14th, 2004

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  • butterflyinflight
    October 18, 2004
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    Watch your puncuation, there are a few mistakes throughout this poem, but an otherwise well-versed poem. Keep writing, and thank you very much for your entry. I like this very much.
    -butterflyflight