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the painted masterpiece is you

The paintbrush stroke onto the canvas
Once an empty sheet is now a masterpiece

Blue circles make your eyes
While the wavy brown makes your hair
The slabs of pink make your lips
And everything else makes you fair

How beautiful your soul looks to me

Colours in a hue do no justice to you
Honey, the painted masterpiece is you

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Written October 14th, 2004

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  • sense surreal gold member
    September 29, 2008

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    Well for sure this girl is very pretty, no beautiful...yes color might do justice...it's the inspiration that gives you masterpiece and yeah...shes the masterpiece! Labor of Love too.


  • Fool In Love
    October 25, 2004
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    yeesshhhh

    Very B E A UTIFUL. Short and sweet. Nothing really to critique u on. Keep it up



    ~Nuttz~



  • dcrys13411
    October 25, 2004
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    hehe love ur world! so dont apologize! hehe tnx for the comment and applause.

    dnt

  • Diane Wehi
    October 22, 2004
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    This reminded me of how we all can be the canvas and paint our own masterpiece of ourselves. We all are a work of art and I love the way you expressed it. Gets the imagination going.
    mmm...What can I paint today? Anything I want. Clear canvas so I can start all over again.
    Sorry went into my own world then. lol
    Always enjoy your work. Thank you

  • NeverEndingLove
    October 15, 2004
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    This is such an awesome write. It shows beauty and emotion. Keep up the great work.

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