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Where I belong

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You know I love you with all my heart
why does our love have to keep us apart?
Your arms around me make me complete
your loving words I want to hear my sweet.
Why do you torture me the way you do?
your silence makes me feel so blue.
I know you love me, for I feel your shiver
when you touch me, oh how I quiver.
A sensitive man I know you to be
so why do you do this to me?
I can never let you go!
you know that is so!
The love I have for you is so strong
for I'm in your heart where I belong.





Author notes

my love had his computer crash, that's why he could not come on, but we felt each other.
Written October 14th, 2004

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  • Windworder gold member
    October 12, 2005
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    Unrequited love seems to be the main drum beat as of late. Must be a lot of it going around. Enjoyed the read.


  • shubs
    September 7, 2005
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    Lovely poem filled with love that is your forte' and that is very difficult to sustain,yet you manage to conjure different images of Love,poem after poem...way to go--Shubs


  • jenelda silver member
    June 11, 2005
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    YYEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEESSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSS.another bloody love poem.
    NA NA NA NA NA NA NA
    Jenn

  • montez gold member
    June 11, 2005
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    NOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO
    PLEASE Jen, not ANOTHER bloody love poem!
    R.


  • eternalpoet
    November 10, 2004
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    5 stars *****

    great and deep emotions was what i able to read when i was reading your write.. its really nice to see your true love for thhat lucky person... give him my regards dear... i know you miss him.. this poem is the perfect proof... its nice.. may be.. more than that.. take cares and have a nice time my dear friend... just keep it up.. your humble little friend... ... ... .... - vic ( who else? )


  • November 3, 2004
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    Wow, this was really good. I enjoyed reading this piece of work you placed here, for all of us to see. Keep up the good work, and may the good Lord always be with you...


  • guardian angel
    October 18, 2004
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    i really thought this was true love at its deepest. really nicely written


  • Reece Magic
    October 17, 2004
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    A+

    This is an excellent poem Jennifer, an excellent poem. That is true love, and one that I myself wouldn't take for granted. Must be a lucky man. This poem flowed beautifully and had a great rhyme scheme. Excellently written.


  • Samplette gold member
    October 15, 2004
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    I have that kind of love Jennifer...and I quiver when ever he touches me and we've been married over 21 years. It is a blessing to find a love that is real. This is a wonderful write.
    Sam

  • jenelda silver member
    October 15, 2004
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    Thank you abdul for your wonderful comment, I really enjoy you visiting me and reading my poems, I will be in touch with you by IM Abdul-jenni

  • abdulrahman
    October 14, 2004
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    yap here u are again always with perfect and fasicnating pome f ur u are too good i wondr why u didn`t send me ims i hop u fine the 5th lne and 7-9 are so nice i like the word u use
    don`t let him go n don`5t let me go too causei like u so muchhhhhhhhhthere

  • Dantes Prayer
    October 14, 2004
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    Very good

    ahh, yes. I can relate to this. Great work, and you definately captured the emotion well. I hope this special someone realises what he or she is blind to see.

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