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Wishing Star

I wish I may, I wish I might
wish upon this star tonight
and all my fear would float away
about what's to come another day

But then I look around this star
and remember what's happened to me so far
So many things You've done for me
how, for me, You died on that tree

I could never repay You for what You've done
only prepare for what's to come
I know You're always there, even now
when I'm broken hearted or floating on a cloud

I look at these children around me
they having nothing at all, yet they're so happy
we tell them about You with all our strength
realizing that without You, we are weak

I look up at that star again
and wonder if it has another friend
someone else waisting their time on a star
not realizing what You've done for them thus far

And even though they may not know Your name
I pray, that before it's too late, they are told of Your fame.

Author notes

Another poem about my mission trip in Mexico. It was such a life changing experiance. And the team definitly learned that we had to have faith and rely on GOD ALONE to make it through that trip.
Written October 13th, 2004

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  • zodiac
    August 14, 2005
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    A beautifully written poem ,very inspiring .keep up the work ,i'll be watching, and keeping a look out for more of your inspiration well done
    Edited on Aug 14, 8:45 because 'left out sentance'.
  • babyboy4babygirl
    July 13, 2005
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    great write

  • Skawe
    July 10, 2005
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    this is really good, as everyone above has told you. I just got back from a walk, but to my dismay there were no stars .oh well, anyway thus far you're poems are magnificent.
  • once i ate a rabbit
    June 1, 2005
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    wow! that poem is amazing and so true! Well I joined that "christian music" group that you are in and just want to say hi! and your poems are very good! and barlowgirl rocks!

  • XhiddenxBEAUTYx
    May 5, 2005
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    Amazing

    Wow,i totally understand this!I am a Christian aswell! I love Barlow Girls(the band).All of your poems are very inspiring!!Please check out some of my poems(Giving it up and Every second are my best i think).I wish you the best!

  • angelsslayer
    April 14, 2005
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    great poem! u write really beautifully
  • Silverbeach
    December 2, 2004
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    Humbling

    So true... I pray that people will realize what He has done for them. Fanastic poem on the everyday life and realizing that we can't do it on our own. Nice write- once again!

  • E.m.d
    November 30, 2004
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    Very good poem....it sounded like a lullabye......amazing! and calming! i look forward to reading more of yours keep up the good wrk

  • chabooch
    October 13, 2004
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    aWsOmE

    I know what you mean, I was in Nogales with my school and the kids were just as you described them. It was a life changing experience. Great poem, keep it up!!
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