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Everything I Need

I love you like a summer breeze
Gently caressing my skin

I love you like the clear, blue sky
When I look into your eyes

I love you like a strong oak tree
Standing tall and firm

I love you like the warm, bright sun
Embracing me in warmth

You are everything I need

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Written October 12th, 2004

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  • Rose Dark Thorn gold member
    December 26, 2005
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    Thank you.
  • AlmostLoved
    December 25, 2005
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    great

    o so sweet i love it! great write so innocent and deep! good job!
    -A.L.

  • GauArrowny
    February 5, 2005
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    I really love you. This is a real pretty poem. I wouldn't mind a warm, bright sun embracing me right now. *shivers* Oh well, bed shall soon come. Like the two lines/stanza format. Makes it so much easier to read.