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Waiting For My Moment

We live our lives day by day and the years go passing by.the people we
meet,the places we travel,the obstacles we defeat in our way are only
there for a moment,then it slowly fades away
We try to hold on to our best moments with a picture or we store it in the
depths of our minds.but pictures fade and your mind slips away,and the
memory of that moment is now gone.
We often try to keep it alive by sharing that moment with a friend,and hoping that they'll keep it alive when they repeat it again.
You see in this world you live your life in waiting on a special moment
a memory that longly lives long after you have gone.and thats the moment
in your life thats worth waiting on that special moment that forever lives on and on and on...

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Written October 13th, 2004

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  • June 22, 2005
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    very nice. We probably have a lot in common. If you read some more of my poems you will understand why. I will definately read some more of your thoughts. Im 26 f from canada. Please write back and tell me what you think.