Hang in there my dear sweetheart,
I'm believing faith for two
The nights of sadness you feel,
I shall whisper, I love you.
Though both our hearts can endure,
If we rest within our love
Piece the puzzle together,
Sharing dreams we've both dreamt of.
If gazing through pools of pain,
Is too much for you to bare
Stare through mine, my lady love,
My soul will bear your despair.
As much as I can love you,
With all I have within me
Know I want to give you love,
Now throughout eternity...
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Timothy,
This is such a wonderful poem for your love. When you love so one as much as you do for your wife, there is nothing that you wouldnt do to help her through her pain. You have such a wonderful heart.
I love you bro
Tammy
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Eternal love...
Ah...this is beautiful and sweet and what sweetheart would not love having this gift of gentle love!! This is real sugar and sweet for a honey! There is a timeless message in these carefully crafted words: "...for we are made for loving: all the sweets of living are for those that love. Be joyful, unafraid". A poem that paints true love...
Nicolette
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This is very beautiful you can feel the love flowing through each word, job well done.
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How beautiful this is and what a lucky woman that has such lovely poetry written for her. This is wonderful. Makes my heart go ~sigh
~Lyrical
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Beautifully Penned and simply a true blue love song!
Je’tadore for eternity the you in you so sweet whole and complete
And if there is anything I can ever do
To share and lighten this despair
Feel free to call upon me to be there
For your love is everywhere!
Oh your love is a love song so true
As true as the stars in the midnight sky of neon blue
And what a dream is the love of you
How sweet and lovely to Penn this for your honey
Your send thrills and smiles through your poets abbey
Ditto Ditto Ditto to what each and every heart has inscribed
On your golden blue pages of deep insight
Have I told you your love is pure delight
Have I told you your words caress even in teardrops of gladness
You can carry all of us within your loving touch
That we all need so very much
You smile and the whole world is wrapped in clover
You share the bliss of eternal dreams
As if you gaze in Merlin’s wells of magic themes
Oh you’re a love song within a flowing stream
Darling I can feel the love in your heartstrings for all of eternity
And in your love so charming you sing sing sing
Of the happiness true love brings
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Beautiful
What a beautiful piece, your "lady" is truly lucky to have someone as special as you to love her so much. Your words flowed and rhymed wonderfully, and the true emotion and love from your heart beamed through this. You are a sweet soul, Tim.
Keep penning, Kate 
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Very lovely and sincere poem! Excellent job!
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Honey is sweet and so are you! Your honey is lucky to have you!
Beautiful poem!
Much Love,
<3 Maureen
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Straight from the heart
Very beautiful piece Timothy shows how much you love your wife and that you would support and be there for them. She has a wonderful friend in you. Nicely written..
Sherry
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This poem is such a beautiful way to suport your sweetie. It easily illustrates how much you care. You are truly a compassionate soul.
Christine
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So beautiful, so true. I say the same things over and over again to you but I truly admire your work, you are a wonderful soul.
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I certainly hope the one this was meant for embraces your words.
Gorgeous piece Timothy! I especially love this stanza...
If gazing through your pools of pain
Is too much for you any day to bear
Stare through mine instead my lady
And my heart will carry your despair
It is that ability of yours to ease others pain...that adds to your specialness. Ok...add your cute smile to that also.
Hugs and love my friend...
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Incredibly Beautiful
AWWW Beautiful Timothy. You heart is kind, sweet and gentle and it echoes through your poetry. Your work stems straight from your heart and the love you feel for your honey just shines through. A lovely write my sweet brother. Thanks for sharing your heart. Avril
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Smiles, this will make someone happy for sure. I know it lifted my spirits. Your soul is what makes you amazing....I hope you never forget all that you have done for those in their time of need, know that you have had some part in making me the brighter person I am today.
~Carrie
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Wow...... Timmy this is such a good piece from you...... But what am I say all of your work is amazing....... Your work is so beautiful....... You can always tell your work is from the heart...... And that makes a person who they are.,..... And your such a beautiful person....... keep it up....... With much love......
Heather
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