This 'poem' is from a play The Ascent of F6 written with Christopher Isherwood about Michael Ransom trying to climb F6,a Himalayan mountain, for his mother. The lament is for his brother, James Ransom, who died and whom he (Michael) was trying to out-shine!!!
Thanks to guest reader Helen Storey for this additional information
Last line too black. 'For nothing now can ever come to any good'
Try
For now there is nothing, now, where can I find any good?
Why do you have three exclamation points after ".. trying to out-shine" ?
It sounds hysterical!!!
Like this!!!
As if you're very easily excited!!!
stoopid.
Having just lost the love of my life, my soul mate, my everything two weeks ago at a young age of 47; This poem captures exactly how I feel during my darkest moments. Rather than criticizing the author, I beg you to listen to the pain and anguish that he (and others, myself included) feel when they mourn the loss of a loved one. The wonderful and beautiful thing about poetry is that it is one's personal means of communication. For those out there who have lost the most precious person in their life, this truly encompasses the feelings we go through. Peace and love to those who are missing their love. My deepest sympathy to you all. Light and love - John's love.
I thoroughly enjoyed reading this.
When a loved one passes away you want the world to stop and notice it, but it never does.
Life goes on and the world still turns.

Such a gr8 gr8 gr8 poem. Very moving and very loving and full of grief so bad it's almost unbearable in its poetic beauty and sadness. I saw this in a movie once and the actor did a very cool rendition of it, standing beside his lover's grave.
This has got to be one of my favorite poems. It touches the very soul. It's inadequate to properly praise this work of poetic genius with mere words.

Classic. Timeless.
I think Helen Storey is full of SHIT, many homophobes have come up with explanations for this poem. This is clearly a poem to a lover, not a friend , brother, nor acquaintence.
This is very very good.(:
So deep and very meaningful.. Full of emotion..
Having read some of the comments I offer this; When someone dies it feels, especially if they were someone that you looked up to, like everything in the world should be used as a sounding board for loss. In this example as it was written from the perspective of someone who is trying to "out-shine" the man who died, I imagine that if that person was always, at least in your mind, the golden one, the only "irony" (using the term a little loosely) would be that the world is EXPECTED to stop. Also rhyme can sound bouncy to people that usually prefer prose. In forensics we were told when interpreting poetry to avoid sing-song whaen reciting, but this is not a cheerful piece
However if you do get it done would you add an extra line citing Oldpoetry? 