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you say bonjour

Here i sit
a friend to the left,
a bitch to the right,
a pep squad in front.

were i to look over my shoulder,
i would find what I'm looking for.

a set of eyes

a tear,
a wink,
a grimace.

Never can i tell...

but always there
beauty.



beauty in every aspect.
in love,
in life,
in thought
(in face).

of a mind i do not know,
but wish for the chance to...

maybe tomorrow

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Written October 12th, 2004

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  • BluePhoenix
    October 12, 2004
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    You're so mysterious. These pieces of yours always leave me wondering.
    Lovely, I'm honored to have read it.
    Thanks for liking my new piece, or at least for applauding if onyl to be kind. I heart you with all of my existence! Keep on keeping on.

    RESPECT

    AG