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Can't have you

Knowing I can't have you is making me crazy,
All I want is to be with you.
To hold you,
Kiss you,
Love you.
That's all I ever wanted.

I sit next to you.
You don't see me.
You don't know me.
You think you do,
But you don't.
You don't know me.
But I know you.

I just want to wrap my arms around you,
But I hold them together.
I just want to place my lips against yours,
But I keep them shut tightly together.
I just want to tell you that I Love You,
But I hold it in.
I just want to stare at your perfect eyes,
But I just look away.

Every time you smile,
It's like my darkest clouds melt away,
And only the warm sun on my skin is left to shine.
Every time you breathe ,
Is the like the wind flowing through my hair.
Every time my heart beats,
It's only because of you.

Your so close yet so far.
I want to reach out and touch you.
I want to just come out and say it,
But I don't.
I just get up and walk away.

Day after day after day after day
Wanting
Wishing
Hoping
Praying
For some sigh of acknowledgement for me.

Knowing I can't have you is driving me MAD,
So I just do it.
'I Love You'

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Written October 12th, 2004

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  • XdazingXstargazerX
    May 6, 2007
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    wow i feel the same way sometimes... this poem really lets out good emotions............ kudos!!!

  • Goldfist
    March 27, 2006
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    nice

    I know how this feels all too well. Plainly put. This is a very relatable work.


  • October 12, 2004
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    Yeah... These things happen, and you're lost as to what to do.. Hopefully everything turns out for the better.

  • MsLaDyAvErAgE
    October 12, 2004
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    Awwww! This is so so sad. I know how you must feel. I've been there. I've loved someone that I could never have to myself. It pained me so deep to know that I love her so dearly when she doesn't love me. It's such a painful experience. I hope you can get with them soon.

    LadyRage