perfumed air wafts
scent saturates mournful blooms
mortified skunk squirms
Patricia Gibson-Williams
Author notes
I hope you liked this one.
Written October 11th, 2004
In a list
A contest entry
- ~ haiku ~ 13 hour contest ((CLOSED)) by FifthDove.
300 points, ended October 11, 2004, 14 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
What did you think
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Spiffy!
Oh, the poor skunk. (Suddenly thinks of the movie "Bambi" and the skunk, Flower) Heh, 'tis a spiffy poem!
Have more flowers!
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Hi Patti
I liked this one, what a contrast a beautiful sweet perfumed flower, and a skunk thank you for making me smile.
Good write.
Take care
Elaine
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This was very cute. I must say I really enjoyed this. I am still trying to grasp the whole haiku thing. Great job! Good luck in the contest!
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LOL! This is great what a contrast, a sweet smelling flower and a terrible smelling skunk! GREAT! Good luck with the contest!
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this one made me smile, i am just learning about the art of haiku, this is a lovely and funny one
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Ah-Ha.... Excellent haiku
I was surprized
I love that Ah-ha feeling. And a very humorous haiku at that. Thank you for the entry and good luck in the contest.
Cindy -
The poor little skunk, smelling all nice and fresh-flowery now. Nice poem, I think I will steal a mournful bloom.
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Makes me want to be in a field of really great smelling flowers, beautiful write, and beautiful imary, very uplifting
~ Kristy
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