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To Light Up Your Life

My heart seems to feel this unbelief you explain,

And this void of hope leaves you quite empty

But I'd build a bridge over your river of pain,

With words I weave of peace, love, and sympathy.

I know not the trail you are going through,

But have the hope of a new day in song

A prayer that I sing in angelic tune,

That will ease all doubt and build faith strong.

I will ask the dear Lord to grant you healing,

And then walk the path where faith does its part

Then dance to romance and start a feeling,

Of laughter that would heal your heart.

I'd carry you like the angels would,

With powerful wings that shine of white

And mend all misery that I could,

So you could sleep well at night.

Dream of life as a fairytale,

Awake afresh with a new day's dawn

Then you'd know, that love cast its spell,

And you can sing in your heart a new song.

Author notes

\I so hope I have helped lift your spirits in any way, much love, Timothy The Poetic Weaver~\
Written October 10th, 2004

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  • raggyann
    March 9
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    i love this
    ilove this
    i love this


  • kvwriter silver member
    September 15, 2007

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    Oh, goodness, Timothy. Tears are forming, making my temples hurt and my eyes feel too hot. I needed to read this one. This write is genuine, from the heart of true compassion where no judgment exists. Beautiful heart you have! That's where inspiration that heals the wounded spirit comes from. Your writes flow like an artesian well. Thank you for this one. I believe I can get through my day now, my week, my month, even my years. And I love fairytales too. Love to you and yours. Be blessed!--Kel :

  • PassionsPromise gold member
    September 10, 2007
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    I'd carry you like the angels would,
    With powerful wings that shine of white
    And mend all misery that I could,
    So you could sleep well at night.

    Beautiful stanza, it all is but this one hits my soul. great job here poet.
    be well and be blessed. lvoe ya


  • Jaydess
    October 12, 2004
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    Exceedingly excellent! Sounds like something someone should write for me.... hehe. It is wonderful to love someone this way, and want to make their life the best that it can be.

    Excellent write.

  • Maureen silver member
    October 11, 2004
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    I hope you have lifted her spirits for you surely have lifted mine!

    Very nicely done!

    Much Love,
    <3 Maureen

  • Whispering Winds
    October 11, 2004
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    This is a very touching write.

    *I'd carry you like the angels would
    With powerful wings that shine of white
    And mend all misery that I could
    So you could sleep well at night*

    That stanza is really about you. for you always try to do what you can to help someone in need.
    Thanks for sharing this wonderful write.
    Many blessings to you in the contest.
    Tammy




  • Sunkissedrose
    October 11, 2004
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    Stunning

    As always impeccably wonderful Your words never fail to inspire me or lift me up in some extraordinary way. Sometimes I think that is your purpose in this life, to heal the hearts of others, and to help them with their faith, even when you are struggling with your own. Much love always.
    Carrie

  • qnhoneybee
    October 11, 2004
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    This is a beautiful and such a wonderful thing to write for another person. This was such a very uplifting poem I can't imagine anyone not being inspired by it. It is great to know that their are so many people here that are ready and willing to offer their words of comfort to each other. That is where our talents work for us.
  • Ladybug1962
    October 10, 2004
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    Your name truly fits who you are. Your poem was uplifting and inspirational in a new and different way. You made the songs soothing to the inner poet in me and that is no easy feat! Nice job!

  • Night Hope gold member
    October 10, 2004
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    Bravo, Sir...a Lovely Write!!!

    A beautiful penning, Timothy...elegant & eloquent & beautiful rhyme scheme...& lovely heart~felt sentiments throughout...Bravo, Sir!!! I especially liked the line, '...Dream of life as a fairytale...' & so...a Gift...it's also listed on my author's page...a segment called, 'Knock on the Duir'...it's quite lovely...& I think you'll enjoy it immensely...any time someone says they're plagued with writer's block, I send them this link...a cure~all...Be well, Poet... Wanda
    www.duirwaighgallery.com/inspiration_trailer.htm

  • elisabeth0129
    October 10, 2004
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    Beautiful write. You did an excellent job. It was a very uplifting and sweet write. Its refreshing to see a write that's not sad and depressing. I do like those kind because they are very emotional but this write was so emotional and full of love that it was equally as powerful and from the heart as those types of piece.Great job. Thank you for sharing.

    Elisabeth

  • maryannde gold member
    October 10, 2004
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    Leave it to our friend Timothy to pen such beautiful uplifting words! His empathy and sympathy always bring hope and a feeling of such caring.

    Very nice work my friend...your rhyme was excellent, and of course your thoughts always touch us just where it should.

    Best of luck with this one!
    Hugs and love my friend..
    Mary Ann

  • poeticweaver gold member
    October 10, 2004
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    Thanks!

    I'm trying my dear friend, we all have those valleys low, but I'm climbing slowly but surely! Thanks for reading me, and I appreciate you always!

    -Timothy The Poetic Weaver~

  • October 10, 2004
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    Very good poem Mr. Timothy. With the line about the Lord, does this show a reoccurance of faith? Best of luck for you in all your travels.
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