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Wait

Getting late.
Half asleep.
Waiting for your call.

Dozing off.
Phone ringing.
Waiting for your voice.

Wide awake.
Softly speaking.
Waiting for your laugh.

Exchanging sweet goodbyes.
You'll be here soon.
Waiting for your smile.

Heart racing.
Opening my door.
waiting for your touch.

Seeing your beautiful face, looking in your eyes.
I slowly take your hands, as I realize...
You were worth the wait.

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I just started writing, and here's what I came up with
Written October 10th, 2004

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  • silver bugs
    November 5, 2004
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    Aww this is so cute <--tears of happiness Great job on this...Oooo it's very good. thanks for sharing and keep it up!
    ~Lana

  • Readerrach
    October 16, 2004
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    adorable! :)

    Aww! What a cute poem...I really like it!
    PS thanks for your comment on mine too...


  • CoyoteLyle
    October 12, 2004
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    Lol. I love all of you the bestest. Teeheehee

  • Loveable Cherub
    October 12, 2004
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    Oh, but you love me best, right?


  • CoyoteLyle
    October 12, 2004
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    Aww. Thank you. You're all so sweet

  • justifiedsmile
    October 11, 2004
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    That is so beautiful and sweet. Hopeless romantic... and I agree with them... any girl would be lucky to have you. Great flow, captivating, and heart warming.

  • SweetLorrain
    October 11, 2004
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    Wow. That is so amazingly sweet. Like K said, any girl would be lucky to have a guy like you.

    :love:
    V

  • Loveable Cherub
    October 11, 2004
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    Awe, Kyle. You're such a sweetheart. Any girl would be lucky to have such a sweet guy like you. Take care
    ^loves^
    k

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