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Lord I need you

Patience, never my strong point
Lord, you know that
And yet you send me tests all the time
I try to pass lord I really do

But each time I fail
Lord I need to trust in you more
I need to just give it to you
And not worry about it

But I do worry Lord
I do still want to fix it myself
I want to find it myself
But each time I try

I fall and fail
Lord I need you
Lord I can't do this alone
I need you

Lord I want to give it all to you
The relationships that I want to have but don't
The family struggles, the grades,
I want to give it all to you

So why do I still worry,
Why do I still fall short
I just want to give it to you
I don't want to think about it

What is it going to take?
I just want to give it all to you
So I'll try again
and again until I get it right

And every time I fail
You'll pick me up and
I'll try again
I'll get it right, Lord

Lord: Take my burdens
Take My struggles
My wants and My needs
I give them up to you now

I don't want them anymore
I can't do it alone
I need you with me
In your name I pray
            Amen.



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Starts as a poem, ends as a prayer
Written October 10th, 2004

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  • Chelsea Ventura
    February 2, 2006
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    Wow nice sort of prayer poem thing, lol
    Glad you have faith on god
    I know he gives us lots of trials in life, but sure he give us trials that we can always get through.
    But yeah some ppl get hopeless easyly, but we shud never give up faith on god coz he'll always there for us whenever we fail which is a gud thing.
    nice poem

    ~chelsea~


  • ColinSJones
    October 10, 2004
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    a very honest prayer which we should all be praying...it is only by God's grace that we are able to do anything at all..very good piece

  • DrKildare
    October 10, 2004
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    A strong and real-felt experience in nice words.