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Temptation

My
mouth
Is
Watering

I'm
Licking
My lips

My
Heart begins
To beat
Rapidly

Goosebumps
Cover
My skin

I
Begin
To pant

Sweat

Foam at
The
Mouth
Like a
Hungry wolf

Looking
At
something
I cannot
Have

On
The table
It sits

Staring
At me
Intensely
As
Though
It has eyes

Drawing
Me
Near

Wanting my mouth

I can't
Resist the
Princess House
Crystal
Jar

I
Open it,
Close
My eyes
And
Take
A deep
sigh...


Chocolate!

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Written October 10th, 2004

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  • Princess Muse silver member
    November 29, 2004
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    I like this! Nothing like building me up for one love and giving me another! Sex or chocolate...tough call sometimes!
    Victoria Lin

  • forgottenPage
    October 17, 2004
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    Tihs is great.It's nice to read something different for a change........but now I'm hungry.Anyway,keep up the great work.
  • Danaqt72
    October 13, 2004
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    Thanks, Pool. Glad you liked (smiles)

  • October 12, 2004
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    Great work, had to read another one of your pieces, you do have many styles! Love the chocolate! This is unique!
  • Acetylene wishes
    October 12, 2004
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    chocolate, very nice, though rhytm threw me a bit
  • Yunaleska
    October 12, 2004
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    This is great! I loved it. I was all serious to the end then I started laughing. Great poem.

  • MirandaNicole
    October 11, 2004
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    This is really cute. I like it. Thanks for sharing. Keep up the great work. I hope to read more of your work soon.

    ~Miranda
  • Danaqt72
    October 11, 2004
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    Oh, thanks for the extra giggle! (smiles)

  • October 11, 2004
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    sorry but there are just small rocks in those wrappers now, i sneaked in ebfore and ate all of the chocolates, loosens belt, and bloody nice they were too, cheers.
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