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God Is My Savior

I am only learning what God means to me,
He very recently saved my lost soul,
a non believer for so many lost years,
life's bitterness had taken it's toll.

I found God through a sweet young man,
he spoke how God always loved me,
I have found peace and tranquility,
without God, this just would not be.

God's wonders  have opened my eyes,
I now see the wonders of His love,
living my life completely for my Lord,
waiting for eternity, in Heaven above.

Every thing in my life has changed,
God's greatness is so abundantly clear,
I see things now through God's love,
there is no more sorrow, no more fear.

Words in a poem cannot fully express,
the passion of my love that I now see,
I truly rejoice in His wondrous love,
Yes, God truly means the world to me.

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Written October 9th, 2004

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  • Sandygram silver member
    October 16, 2004
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    Thank you so much for reading my poem and leaving such a nice comment. It is most sppreciated. Take care, Sandy

  • Neon Highway
    October 16, 2004
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    this was an awesome preach, showed your views so well

  • Arovell
    October 14, 2004
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    This is really good. I've been hearing alot of this kind of situation lately and Im so glad that so many people are learning more about God. Congrats on the trophy!

  • Sandygram silver member
    October 10, 2004
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    Thank you so much for the lovely comment. I will never guve up on God. It took me much too long to find him. Take care Sandy

  • October 10, 2004
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    I understand the whole last stanza. You have made a great poem of this topic! Make suer you keep writing and never give up on HIm. Good luck in the contest.

    !Lyndsey!

  • Sandygram silver member
    October 10, 2004
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    Thank you for your kind words. Every great poet has a soft side, even you. Thank you for being happy for me. It is most appreciated. Take care, Sandy

  • Sandygram silver member
    October 10, 2004
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    Thank you so much for your lovely comment and for taking the time to read my poem. It is most appreciated. Take care, Sandy

  • Sandygram silver member
    October 10, 2004
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    Thank you pozo. I love to write about my newly found love of God. It is such a pleasure. I am amazed how wonderful my love has become since I was saved. I always appreciate your comments. Take care, Sandy
  • pozo
    October 10, 2004
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    A wonderful, beautiful poem which I liked a lot- I love all of your Christian poems, but this one was a wonderful one A fantastic poem, well put together and a great subject- perfect
  • Quasar
    October 9, 2004
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    Superb Testimony

    Beautiful!! I applaud both your talent and your faith. I too am a believer, and agree wholeheartedly with you about the goodness of the Lord. This is so wonderfully heartfelt. Every aspect of it is just perfect: content, rhyme, flow, word choice - all of it. Absolutely inspiring! Best to you in the contest, and in all things. ~~Quasar~~
    (I have checked out your author's page and find that we have a few more things in common - Pisces with grandchildren to name a few)

  • October 9, 2004
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    i am not a believer, but i am pleased that you have found happiness in your life and are feeling full of life.
  • BeCaUsEoFyOu
    October 9, 2004
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    This is a really good poem! God's grace is really wonderfully placed in words here! I really love this poem. Great write and best of luck in the contest!
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