A. They say
B. You can't give away
C. Something you ain't got
C. Therefore
B. They can't receive it unless
A. They already have it
B. To discover the
C. Untruth
A. Warm me not to my disposition to passion
C. Ride me
A. Thou spiritual eroticism
B. Irenically
Author notes
Just an exercise in burning love.
Written October 9th, 2004
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astounding!
wow you never ever cease to amaze me. your writes are fantastic, and i love the meaning LOL. its nice to see some new writes by you ET... please do keep it up, im always looking for new poems by you! -
I'm placing this post on my group, but since I logged on and saw your comment, I'm sending it to you first. I believe in GMC, God Made Coincidences. I don't think you are in need or recovery or anything! LOL! I'm just sharing, that's all. Here it is: Alcohol gave me wings to fly, then it took away the sky. What alcohol will NEVER know is...the sky? It belongs to God. God is the oxygen of my sobriety. Sobriety also has given me wings to fly, then surprise, surprise, God GAVE me the sky. Peace Through Love. ET
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My fellow Enigma strange or not this was a very wise and thought provoking piece to read! I love to read your writes my dear whenever I have the chance as I know I'll have some fun as well as food for thought!
~Nikki~ -
I thought about making the ABC's ordered for a message, but I thought it would defeat the message that D is hidden (D being the fourth premise to the final conclusion). Write that book!
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i like it,
i was trying to see if all the A's could be put together or the Bs/C's, but..they dont =( but it'd be fucking cool if they did!
lol most men like to brag i've found, but i've only ever known ONE to have it be true.
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through peace it shall be.
very nicely written.
I get most of this i think,
I have to come back when I'm
not braindead and read it.
Glad to see a new one from ya.
Take Care, Olivia!~ -
Thx Sonia, The Cockatiel and many males share something in common, if you know what I mean. It's like my wife says, "Egads, Tim! Not too big around but BOY is it SHORT!" It feels like ten feet to me! That's all I'm talking about! LOL! Sorry, I'm getting naw-t again.
PTL~ET Timo -
Wow Mr T ! Very unusual structure for a poem but thats what makes for interesting reads - anything unorthadox and inventive.
I love the erotic theme - and the picture made me laugh ! Imaginative piece of work Tim. Look forward to more .
Hope all is okay fellow revolutionary.
Sonia X -
I hear strange, and I am like a moth to the flame...oddly you also use the word "burning" -Anyway, I actually get it, the poem that is. And the rest (title, cockatiel picture, and the ABC's) I find strangely amusing -an exercise, if you will, for my tired, unchallenged grey matter... Thanks ET I am awake now
Best wishes ~M~
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LOL! I'm glad you commented. I was thinking the write too strange for comments. Thank you.
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What a treat this is! Unique and pleasantly appealing... and you helped me learn a new word. I had to look up irenically. (: Peace!
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