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New Faith in Fate

I never, used to
Believe, in fate
Nor, in destiny-y.
Until, that day, that I, meet you
Now fate, seems to, come, true-ue.

For my love of you, knows no other
It’s true
For my love of you, can be measured
Not by words
And my love of you has bound past rivers, ravines
And the seas
And I’ll never, ever let you go.

Baby, I love you
This much I know-ow
I simply, want to hold you close
Close enough to smell the softness of your hair-air
And Kiss, upon the lips, and the cheeks-eks, OH, oh oh

Course

Darling, I wish
You were by my side-ide.
There was no distance, no air, between our thighs
That I could hold you, and never let you go
Whisper in your ears, that I, do love you, oh oh oh

Course

I never, used to
Believe, in fate
Nor, in destiny-y
Until, that day, that I, meet you
Now fate, seems to, come, true-ue.

Now fate, seems to
Fate, seems to
Fate, for me and you
Has, come, true-ue-ue-ue.

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Written September 30th, 2004

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  • jellybean123
    October 9, 2004
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    hey spiderman....havent talked to ya in a while...but awesome write i love it...its sweet....keep it up!*kailey*