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The Book ( Haiku)

Missing image
With a few leafs left
the new empty page
Recieves a title

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Written July 15th, 2002

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  • Draig aine gold member
    July 15
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    perfection

    haiku on haijen


  • just-an-amateur
    March 15, 2007
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    Seems to be going down a hill(with few leafs left), but then the light peers over the top(the new empty page) and pops out almost (receives a title). The end tied it up nicely!
    Excellent job!
    YOU'VE BEEN HOODWINKED!
    ~M~


  • dawnhall silver member
    February 3, 2004
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    good

    Nice write and I thank you for sharing!

    God is bleassing you!
    Dawn


  • Dizzy Juggalette
    October 12, 2003
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    begins can be so wonderful, yet tragic. nicely written, closed up thought yet, leaving mysterious paths for the mind to wonder. i love it!

    Dizzy

    p.s. thanks for commenting on 'cocain candy' and yes, very nice to meet you to!


  • NurseChilly gold member
    July 15, 2002
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    excellent

    nice write..way to go..bless you, haiku....lol...~~GILL~~


  • Nam
    July 15, 2002
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    neutral

    good one.

    :0)

    Nam

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