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Love on the Stars

When love is spent like a shooting star
You try and find out what made it travel so far,
What pulled the hollow core apart
Catch the essence of the timeless heart;
And find how love originates,
Know some other, eternal star awaits.....
Look up unto the heavenly fire,
And feel the glitter,
Melted by desire

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Written July 15th, 2002

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  • Akilah
    October 29, 2002
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    excellent

    Wow very cool poem I like the line 'Catch the essence of the timeless heart' very nice line.


  • NurseChilly gold member
    July 15, 2002
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    don't touch it!

    somebody found the graphics..lol..nice one Susan...like this one..~~GILL~~~


  • Blushfulmoon silver member
    July 15, 2002
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    Thanks nam
    Blesings
    Susan


  • Nam
    July 15, 2002
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    neutral

    just a lovely picture.

    :0)

    Nam


  • Blushfulmoon silver member
    July 14, 2002
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    Thanks Bigheadbob glad you liked it,,,
    Prudence you too
    Blessings
    Susan

  • pruedence
    July 14, 2002
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    neutral

    very nice :)

  • Bigheadbob
    July 14, 2002
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    excellent

    This is a very cool poem. It's making me think. and I like that. Its wierd through out this whole poem I caught myself adding words that wernt up there. I had to read it like 5 times before I got it right. Its like the whole needing of clousure after a relationship ends. or atleast thats what i got out of it. great write. I usually dont type this much but I just kept on talking.

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