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The Waterfall

As i ride the river of life
Fully aware of the approaching

w
  a
    t
      e
        r
          f
            a
              l
                l

i smile
as i hit the ripples
                      below...........

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Written July 15th, 2002

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  • CountryCousin
    October 7, 2005
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    Wonderful poem and style

    Hey there deal and this is so interesting this style I cannot do it myself. I probably could but you did this so well. Hope you are feeling better.


  • Molassis
    December 7, 2002
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    neutral

    This was really nice... it's the best way to handle life I think... I love waterfalls, besides the rainbow, they are my favorite sight to see. It seems that the picture you enclosed with this poem has been lost though. ~Melissa


  • soulwarrior silver member
    July 23, 2002
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    neutral

    W
    e


    e
    eeeee
    eeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee
    so much fun can I go back for another body slid down
    that w
    a
    t
    e
    r
    f
    a
    l
    l
    of bliss and fun.


  • Jaden silver member
    July 15, 2002
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    excellent

    :o)


  • NurseChilly gold member
    July 15, 2002
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    don't touch it!

    brilliant..love the style..~~GILL~~~


  • Nam
    July 15, 2002
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    excellent

    if you are nude, can i smile too?
    j/k good write.

    :0)

    Nam


  • fantastix
    July 14, 2002
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    excellent

    Weeeeeeeeee! I love the water and all it's expected and unexpected workings. Clever piece. Love the structure.

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