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A Prayer For Jani

Our Father who arts in heaven
I come on bended knees
I have an important prayer request
For my AP friend Jani

You see she's in a coma state
And only you, really know her fate
But she is love so dearly here
And has a family who holds her dear

Many are praying
For her health to be restored
And all our prayers
Are being sent to you Dear Lord

Please hear our prayers
And answer in haste
And let our friend
Jani fully awake

Let her feel the love around her
From her family and friends
And may she continue fighting
And enjoy life once again

Your word tells us,
That if two or more joins to pray
That you will surely listen
To what we have to say

Many prayers are coming to heaven
For Jani has many friends
And we are all praying
That her life doesn't have to end

And in faith we are believing
That a miracle will be done
And Jani will recover
And awake to see her sons





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Written October 7th, 2004

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  • Demokrit
    October 23, 2004
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    A wonderful work here! I love this warmhearthed poem very much- I think this prayer should be heard- great feeling when reading it!


  • qnhoneybee
    October 8, 2004
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    This is a beautiful prayer and you are correct and a lot of people are sending their prayers to Heaven for Jesus to send us one of his miracles and heal Jani to fully recover. I believe that he hears us and is sending Jani our prayers himself. Jani is loved by everyone who knows her. Thank-you for your beautiful prayer.


  • Nelak
    October 7, 2004
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    Beautiful prayer, it needs to be heard

    Bertie,

    A very powerful prayer. I'm sure that God heard this and will heal Jani. She has to pull through it. Your words truly touched my heart. I'm at a loss of words at the moment and I'm not sure what else to say. Usually I'd say more ... I've been praying all day for her to wake up. I love you so very much Bertie.

    With love,

    Kalen


  • Samplette gold member
    October 7, 2004
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    This is a wonderful poetic prayer. Very beautiful work. It touched me as I read it, and I know it will touch all those who do.
    Bless you.
    Sam


  • October 7, 2004
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    Bertie,
    Your word are very strong and powerful! I know Jani (I hope)
    will feel so loved. I'm her sister, Dana, and I'd like to
    have your permission to print this out so I can read every
    prayer to her, when I goto sit with her in the morning.
    Eternal Flames
    (Dana)

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