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Aint fit

You aint done nothing but fight
You aint even been there to get it right
So fuck you and all ur crew
You do what you do and i will do what i do
Kiss my ass biatch because you aint shit
I am a mother you may be the father, but you aint fit

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I haven't been here in a while or had time but im back now
Written October 7th, 2004

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  • Sexyboi
    August 3, 2008
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    WOW surprised no one else commented on this piece this was definetly from a long time ago and i have been here myself but not personally i guess you could say i seen it threw the eyes of my younger sister. I love how you used slang to descirbe what you were feeling because poetry to me is about using different words or different ways of saying things to describe how you feel. Great write.

  • baby-s-man
    July 22, 2008
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    damn that was way deeper than i intesapated, good emotion in this write keep up the good work hun.