what you don't know
wont kill you
but if thats true
why does it hurt so bad?
i wander around anymore
trying to forget
believe me its a task
but i don't think i can do it much longer
you don't see it
the things i've done
to try and escape
pushing people away to hide my fears
along with my many attempts
it never works
i've reached the end
and in this moment
i look for serious help
i thought i could win alone
but its all become too much
so in words i tell you
but if i find nothing
then i wont hesitate to save you all
the best way to escape
always falls to the captive
the decisions they make
could be their last
but in the end
they knowingly tried
in success or failure,
they tried to rid themselves
if only of their previous enslavers
Author notes
eh just something.. i wont explain.
Written October 6th, 2004
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not yer best chic ... still have hope for you tho!
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-Greg -
this was gr8- well done, i had a good image of what you were saying so gr8 write
Crystal xxx -
Great write. Makes the reader think, yet captivates their attention. It's like a puzzle...very interesting.
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*Scratching back of head* Umm...I know there's sense to be made with this. I'm kinda dense right now for some reason. I'm reminded of running away from problems into more problems. *Nods* Probably has nothing whatsoever to do with what you were talking about, but, hey...*shrugs*...I'm at least trying to think here! Lol...*shakes head* I'm a retard. Don't pay me any attention. *Tiptoes away silently* Niiiiiiiiiccee....
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Hmm.. very good write, elusive to what you want to get at but purposeful with the moral.
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