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roses in red
violets in blue I love you
cliche haiku
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Author notes
lol
Why 'in' (as opposed to 'are') well, I didn't want to be toooo cliche! lol
Oh, plus as a gesture of defiance (wahahah) it rhymes (ish) 
Written October 6th, 2004
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Haha..Well I love cliche's so this is pretty good I'd say. Nice pic at the top. I love this, it's beautiful. I'm shit at commenting on haiku's, so just know that I loved it. Thanks for sharing and best of luck in my contest.
Take care
~Lana
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niceness...
Good write here...
Danielle~
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Lol. Count on you to come up with this. But you know, as cliched as it may be, it's still really cute. I think any woman's heart would flutter a bit if a man wrote this for them, simply because it's so sweet in it's simplicity.
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This was nice. I liked the fact that you were able to incorporate a little humor into this. It gave me a good chuckle.
~ John
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I have a rose like that too,
I laughed at the first read and I'm laughing now again!
Thanks and good luck in everything you do!
Mari
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