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Happy Birthday sweetheart

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Today is your Birthday  Sweetheart
my wish for you is your happiness.
My love you’ve had right from the start
God sent me to you, for this I bless.
All my love goes into this greeting
If  it were possible I’d spend it with you
You are the love I have been seeking
All the love I give is forever true.

Happy Birthday, I love you

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Written October 6th, 2004

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  • Sailorswench
    September 3, 2005
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    Very touching and sweet.

  • montez gold member
    June 11, 2005
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    I think "wish" would read better than "wishes" Jen.
    Do you only do lovey-dovey stuff?
    R


  • eternalpoet
    November 9, 2004
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    3 stars ***

    oh.. i think i am lil late to comment on this but "better to be late then never"...i think i know for whom you have written this poem.. .. i wont say much ... .. take cares and have a nice time.. just keep it up dear jenni.. your humble little friend.. ..... ..... - vic.. (who else?)


  • Samplette gold member
    October 15, 2004
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    THis is a wonderful write..and I love the sweetness of it.
    You are always giving love to your friends..
    Sam


  • jenelda silver member
    October 8, 2004
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    Thank you Abdul for your wonderful comment. Jenni
    Edited on Apr 26, 8:31 because ''.

  • abdulrahman
    October 7, 2004
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    this is so beautiful i wonder who is having the bday done today
    so why not ims from u u mad me crazzzzzz why na jenni we frind is anything wrong

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