SWEET LINZUI(cuteness)
My heart is aching from your sadness,
I wish I could wipe away all your tears,
you have seen and felt so much sorrow,
more then your share, in fourteen years.
My dear sweet Linzui please be strong,
remember, keep your faith in God above,
your sister is smiling down on you,
she is now safe, wrapped in God's love.
Cry your tears, feel your angry grief,
Linzui, let God's love pull you through,
the reasons are only known to God,
why these burdens have fallen on you.
Your family also is feeling the anguish,
maybe this will bring them closer to you,
life is much too short to be bitter,
I promise, the sun will shine for you.
please don't get lost in the darkness,
life has many dreams out there for you,
hold on to your friends and family today,
God will be beside you, in all you do.
GOD BLESS YOU AND YOUR FAMILY
Author notes
Linzui is a poet here on allpoetry. She lost her best friend on September22. Now she has lost her sister. Please say a prayer for her.
Written October 6th, 2004
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Thank you so much for your nice comment, Linzui will appreciate your thoughts. Thank you, Sandy
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Thank you so much pozo. She will appreciate your concern. Take care, Sandy
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A very nice poem of support to your friend, tell her I'm sorry about her losses
It must be very hard for her at the moment but I feel this poem was helpful and supportive.
This was a considerate poem which I liked a lot. Thanks for commenting on my poem, yes it was quite a scary picture but I'm glad you liked the poem.
God bless,
Poz
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a nice way to show you care for your friend, i hope she is feeling better knowing she has people around her to comfort and support her.
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Thank you so much Melanie. She can really use your prayers. I thank you for that. I've only know her for a month but we have become close. She has been through so much. God bless you. Take care, Sandy
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Sandy,This was so sweet and caring... I will say a prayer...She is blessed to have friends like you to help her through times like this.... You are so selfless..God bless you for the things you do...
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God bless you Linzui. I love you, Grandma
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thank you so much grandma... this made me cry so hard.... TEARS EVERYWHERE.... ur so nice. i love u... thank you so much
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Thank you so much Tamara for the heartfelt comment. I know Linzui appreciates it. Thank you for keeping her in your prayers. God Bless Yuo, Sandy
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Thank you so much Elaine for the heartfelt comment you left on Linzui's poem. God bless you. Take care, Sandy
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Thank you so much for reading and leaving your heartfelt comment. Thank you for thinking og Linzui Linzui . God bless you, Sandy
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death is such a difficult thing to deal with especially in the age of 14, but as your poem tells her she does have many unopened dreams for her days to be a blessing for her. I hope she does recover and find a silver lining behind the dark cloud around her.
God bless you both
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Oh Sandy, this is a poem of hope, of Gods love. I prey he will show your friend Linzui the sunshine again. I know he will be holding her in his embrace right now.
I will prey for her and her family
Take care and God bless
Elaine
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