My eyes are stinging
The rain is coming
But I don't really know why
My mood is dark
I've lost my spark
I've lost the will I had to fly
Angst washing over me
The thunder storm and lightning
A torrent of rain floods the ground
Someone please lift me
Take my hands, hold me
I fear that I might soon drown
The cold gnaws at me
I'm losing feeling
Someone come warm me, help me feel
I feel so brittle
I feel so little
Like a child, this can't be real
My weakness is consuming
My strength is dissipating
Soon, I fear I'll be dead
I'd like to be held
Feel so warm that I'd melt
And feel the love I never had
But I feel so numb
These eyes are too dry
I have tears that I cannot shed
Author notes
Written October 5th, 2004
A contest entry
- emotion by xstalkerx14.
300 points, ended January 9, 2005, 17 entries
Bronze trophy winner
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Excellent
This is awesome. I loved reading it. I'm so glad you're on my favorites list because I really enjoy reading your stuff. Thanx for writing such powerful and dark poetry. I love it! -
Wow, very powerful. I know the feeling.
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haunting/paralyzing/masterpiece
...feel so warm that I'd melt.......
such a great line.makes my cold fingers tremble in this cold room.
actually the last two stanza's really get me.
-cheers
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