Where is Alice?
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"Where is Alice?"
"Wonderland", said rabbit
"Floating on mushroom clouds!"
Author notes
well...hmmm....has alwys been one of my favorite stories and now am a lil hooked on the american mcgees verion of Alice...kinda sick and twisted, but sooo Alice!
This is to show I did read the rules....made it 10 words exact.lol
Written October 6th, 2004
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Aha! This is cute! Very nice 'ku. I love the imagery it puts forth. The last line is my favourite. Short, compact and to the point with alot of resonance and light-heartedness, this was an enjoyable write!
Thanks for sharing,
Charishma -
I love this page
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Loved this!!! I'm big on the Go ask Alice song. Makes alot of sense w/me w/my history and all. You go girl!!! Jacki
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Alice is a story....however hard to do stories in 7 or 10 words.OK....your rules and will be respected
Blessed be -
Billy....
Somehow I knew if anyone were to "get" this write it would be you.Thanks so much for the kinc comment.Always a pleasure.
Blessed be
~~Billie~~
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John....
Always a pleasure getting critiqued by you.Thanks so much.Yes Alice does have so much that is able to be twisted. Lewis Carrol hid manu inuendos in that story.Everything from drugs and alcohol to abuse. Thanks again for stopping by.
Blessed be
~~Serenity~~
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I'm sorry, i said no first place trophy winners.. unless those are all for stories, you cant enter
-Karen Sue-
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this reminds me of where i sometimes feel i am... and when the rabbit speaks it's just accepted
an amazing ten words that say alot to me, as does her little fellow beside her
billy -
cool
Been writing about Alice lately as has cvillelisa. It certainly has some wonderful bases for twisting.
This reminded me of Grace Slick.
thanks,
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haha aweh, its about a fairy tale. Its nice. I like it.
Good Luck In The Contest
-Karen Sue-
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Oh She isn't the Alice I knew as a child lol, Hope Mr Chasingtheday doesn't invite me to his party lol, if he does I think I will decline
I think you did a wonderful job here, said so much in just 10 little words, well done and good luck in the contest.
Take care because I care
;f Elaine
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The game Alice is my favorite game of all time. I hadn't actually read the books before I started playing it because I'm a little bitch, but after I was done playing it I went out and read both of them, they are excellent although in a different way. But I loved the pictures in the game, they did a real good job at making it creepy.
Anways about the poem it's hard to sum up a whole thing in ten words so you did a good job at it. It's not the best thing I have ever read, but for ten words it is quite good, and I have a sense of love for things about Alice in wonderland so I liked it. -
Leave it to people to completely squash all the sweet Disney warmness straight outta Alice and turn her into creepy knife-totin' stoner.
LOL, congrats on this, though. 
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Short and to the point.Good write.Thanks Jim
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she looks like a pleasant girl, i might invite her to the party i am having, just some guests for dinner, i can't eat too much these days so perhaps she can help me carve them up.
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