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Wedding Leap

We gather here together to unite two bodies holding one soul
As husband and wife, each on plays their role.
I love you both with all my heart,
This love between you tow was meant to e right from the start.
You both look so happy, and better then ever,
This is a love that will end never.
You two look so cute together, so full of romance,
You both took a big leap, you both took a chance,
And I can tell by the look on your faces that yours so happy you took that leap
Now your each others to have and to keep.

Author notes

for my aunt and uncle who are getting married in a week
Written October 5th, 2004

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  • DeepKiss
    October 7, 2004
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    wow dev this is sweet. do they know you wrote this? if not you should show them. its really good. Great Job

  • Michael 54
    October 6, 2004
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    Very Good

    Terrific sentiment in this work. Nice job sharing your feelings also. Very good flow to this piece. Keep up the good work.
    Take care and God Bless,
    Michael