In the sky it hangs
a full moon in full sight
tonight I will die
light from the light
of a full moon night
not a cloud in the sky
as I lay in this clearing
a fire dies from the wind
I lay still with a kriss
next to me
I'll die on a full moon night
to be sure that I will live again
as midnight approaches
I pick up the kriss
that wonderful wavy blade
will bring my end
tonight is a full moon night
it is also a blood moon
what a fitting night to die
I'll bleed to death
as the full moon lays to rest
by the time the moon shows again
I'll be gone my blood staining the ground
the fire dead along with me
I'll never have to face the pain again
cause I've had died on a full moon night
Author notes
Metallica Rules, is this where it goes? I'm like new at this site but hey I'll try you contest.
Written October 5th, 2004
A contest entry
- Open! Open!! Read this!! haha by Dark Angel Reborn.
390 points, ended July 20, 2007, 16 entries
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This is really good. I like it a lot. The repatition didnt work as well as it could here...but...it still is a very good piece. Welcome to Allpoetry! Thanks for entering my contest and goooood luck
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well i must say i loved your poem and welcome to the site. Thank you for entering, and good luck with the contest ^_^...also i found it cool you knew about things like the blood moon and whatnot..anyway...im off to read your other entrys.
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