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I am trying to write some thing with ten word

I am trying to write some thing with ten words

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Written October 5th, 2004

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  • leander gold member
    October 6, 2004
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    very original... I thought first about counting till ten, but that would be too obvious

    Good luck in the contest!
    Leander


  • Karen Sue
    October 5, 2004
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    Hahahahaha
    wow, that actually made me laugh out loud
    it was great

    -Karen Sue-
    Romans 8:28


  • mynameisnoone
    October 5, 2004
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    haha I am not very creative.


  • Buckeyeqt83
    October 5, 2004
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    lol...your funny...