why can't i just let this go
this thing that wears me down
and makes me feel this way
alone and pethetic
miserable and lost
unspoken and untouchable,
numb
it tears into my skin,
like my precious little blade
and makes me worse
making me weaker,
tears upon tears,
cut upon cut,
numb
enough so i feel nothing,
no one...
this burdens me horribly,
cruceifying
why can't i just forget?,
erase...
i feel your arms around me,
but i feel no emotion,
from you, or anyone...
numb
i feel lost
in my own sanctuary
in my dreams
why must i feel this murderer of mine
picking me apart
and erasing my security
and replacing it
with shame,
doubt, .....lonelyness,
and insecurity
why can't i "just" let this go......
why?
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Written October 5th, 2004
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lol thanx foe the compliment.... i really appreciate it.
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friggin awesome
wow. you perfectly decribed how i feel about things sometimes. your poem really spoke to me. there are alot of times i would just like to stop feeling and be 'numb'. great job! -
lol thanx for the complement...i really appreciate it. lol you put a smile on my face just from your coment....lol thanx again and i'll have to check out some of your poems sometime..lol. later and thatnx for the applaud....wow! an applaud..lol i feel special...lol. buh bye......
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Edited on Oct 20, 4:13 p.m. because 'because i dun fucked it all up'. -
Damn girl, this one is amazing. Everyone feels apithy at one time or another, thats just life. Being numb is walls protecting emotions wether it be mine or the person i'm hollow to. This one is fucking awesome. good write, josh
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wow is all i can say and also this piece really moved me and it was amazing but wow.............
love ya
hillary*
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