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green eggs and ham

He had a cool style and some interesting body language
everything but the point came about
there were some anatomical displays
still playin it cool like never before
until the moment came to strike

it was a vague and specific kind of attack
(oxymorronish if you will)
2 steps in one direction
not dignifying anything with an answer in the next footing

later, discussions revealed that dr seuss could
very much inspire a motto to live by:
"girls are like green eggs and ham
you don't know if you'll like one
until you try them and then
you have to sample them all"

strange, amongst mixed signals which seemed almost clear
I was left to wondering "what's next?"
guess I'll have to wait till thursday to find out
or someday like it eventually

Author notes

going for a vague, ambuguous oxymorronish style here

clear but not clear

or something like it.
Written October 5th, 2004

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  • kryspin
    October 6, 2004
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    o0oh

    hey thanks for the feedback! actually my friend's saying was the whole girl thing so it was interesting and it became something to me! he inspired me with his green eggs and ham theory!


  • Kelsey-Jo silver member
    October 6, 2004
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    I think you've achieved your goal... I get it, but not completely. It left me with an air of slight mystery and hidden meaning... almost like an inside joke you have with yourself that no one else will truly understand... lol! But that's just me and I'm crazy! *smile* I really like this style and the way each line led onto the next so well. Very nice!

    -Kelso-