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On Graduation Day

For David, On Graduation Day

As you travel life’s terrain,
its valleys and each mountain peak
Take time to learn from each new day,
it’s love and contentment you seek

Life is like a football game
played through sunshine, rain and snow
For each hurdle makes you stronger,
helps you understand, makes you grow

And if sometimes you fumble,
remember there’s always a save
Whether you’re ahead  in the game
or still trying to catch the wave

Sometimes the going gets tough
but you make it through each season
And someday you’ll look back and see,
all things happen for a reason

Today you embark on life
and I know you’ll not drop the ball
You’ve come this far, so now push on
you’ll see, someday you’ll have it all

I wish you success in life
with happiness and dreams fulfilled
Thank the Lord above for each new dawn,
for a wonderful life to build

You’ll do it, I know you will
you’ll go on to success, you’ll see
Each new day becomes your special time
with love and humility

Congratulations, David !!!
With love from Grandma

For my grandson, David A. P. Williams
on the event of his
High School Graduation
June 11, 2004

Dee Garner

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A little tribute to my grandson who graduated high school this past June.  I wrote this at the time, just now posting it.  He's so cool and such a good person.  I'm so proud of him

Written June 11th, 2004

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  • J aime Coudre silver member
    December 30, 2007
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    Are we proud grandmas or what...


  • raggyann
    September 3, 2007
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    very wonderful
    your words are so true and caring

  • x- dancer -x
    December 23, 2004
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    Great!

    Very nice...beautiful write. Im sure that your Grandson loved it!
    Merry Christmas

  • Rubee
    November 8, 2004
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    What a precious and special write for your grandson and filled with so much wisdom to carry with him in each and everything he endeavors in the future!!!! I'm sure this poem truly touched him and gave him so much encouragement to always try his best...but also, not to let adversity get him down, but to use it to make him stronger. What a wise and loving grandma you are!!!!
    Edited on Nov 08, 9:57 p.m. because ''.

  • catz Moderators member
    November 3, 2004
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    Thanks, pozo.... actually I'm a greatgrandma...several times over. My oldest greatgrandchild is 12 years old ...and thanks for telling me I don't look old enough for all that
    luv ya
    Dee
  • pozo
    November 3, 2004
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    Wow, a wonderful tribute- I wish David the best This was a lovely tribute to a wonderful person in your life at a special time in your life Good write
    Thanks for commenting on my poem
    God bless,
    Pozo
    PS you don't look old enough to be a grandma

  • NicoleAlyce
    October 25, 2004
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    This is really a nice dedication to David. i am graduating soon so it really hit home on a more personal level. I thought it was overall really sweet.
    Nicole

  • SEA angel
    October 25, 2004
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    Well Done

    This a beautiful graduation tribute to your grandson, David. A poem any grandson would be proud to have written for him by such a loving grandparent.
  • myvoke
    October 25, 2004
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    inspiring well done motivating..keep it up

  • October 25, 2004
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    Beautifully written, with love, hope, and most of all encouragement! I believe the best part was how you compared life to a football game, rough! No matter how hard things get, there is a reason and positive side, even if you can't see it at the time it happens! I'm sure David loved it! I wish him all the best! CHANGE THE WORLD DAVID, MAKE A DIFFERENCE! I'm sure he will Ann

  • wohadreambig
    October 25, 2004
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    This a very well written piece. It was well enjoyed

    Janine

  • Blushfulmoon silver member
    October 20, 2004
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    Beautiful poem
    From a beautiful person
    This was loving and so heartfelt Dee
    A treasure indeed
    Love it
    Love you too
    Hugs
    Susan~~~

  • October 5, 2004
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    Catz, how lovely! This is a treasure like no other. This grandson of yours will hold this close for a lifetime.

  • Pierre Richards
    October 5, 2004
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    excellent!

    This is so sweet of his Grandma to write these words of wisdom!
    I know I have made maney and lost it over a few times, and will again. Life is full of challenges, and we must learn from each one.
    Well said my friend!

  • October 5, 2004
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    four days before my ahhhem 21st birthday he graduated i am sure he will walk with strides calm and bold into the future, full of smiles and greedy for more living
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