It's a gorgeous night, more than I could ask.
Every problem, every pain seems to fade
while we walk slowly alone beneath the stars.
Hand in hand, I can't stop smiling.
I never want to let you go.
I wish this night could last forever.
There's so many stars in the sky
I see each tiny reflection
as I look deeply into your eyes.
Sitting by the lake, gazing at the moon,
falling asleep in each other's arms.
This is a night I will never forget.
Author notes
Another short one. Would have been longer, but decided to leave it as it is. 
Written October 4th, 2004
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Thanks
That's what I was going for.
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I love this. IT's so sweet, and romantic. It's what any chick would want their boyfriend to say...
It's such a visual poem, and seems so heartfelt.
Great write!
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Hehehehe. Yeah, that was sorta the point for the background too I'm a thinker, I tell ya. Lol. Monkey, eh? Hehe.
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Oh yes, I also love the background, it adds to the point you made about the stars in the sky and the reflection of them in her eyes.
I meant to mention that in the first one I wrote, but I totally forgot. All I did was talk about other stuff, rather than the poem itself. Derr...
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k
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Hehe. I like how Vicki said "like I said. I like it a lot." But she never said that. What a dork. Yea, I was thinking that's what he would do if he found out. He's such a bastard.
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Hehe. Thanks I don't get it either. And, of course I didn't tell him! I was actually thinking a little about it today.. It would just give him more ammo for riducule.
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Another great poem. God I hate you. Just kidding. Could never hate you. Your sudden talent, perhaps.
Anyway, like I said. I like it a lot.
:love:
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So Kyle...How did you get to be such a good writer? I just don't get it. Hmmph. It's just not fair. Does Jish know you write poetry? Maybe you shouldn't tell him, he might see my comments and then might read my stuff. Ick.
Ah well,
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Yeah, I always seem to do that too. When I thought of it, I visualized every part in my head. I'm glad you did too
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fabulous
a nice happy poem on the opposite end of the spectrum from the last one. yay for my brother! -
beautiful
Very visual, which makes it more interesting to read. You can picture everything. Beautiful. -
Wow, that was fast Thank you for the comment. 'Tis muchly appreciated.
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amazing
Aww this is so romantic!! Great description of the night. Very beautiful poem. Great job...Thanks for sharing
~Lana
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