Far away
A singularity
Everything into nothing
And then nothing into everything
Time going backwards
In this upside down
And inside out world
Glimpses of an untamed time
Of unnameable beauty and life
Freedom only seen in fairy tale
And bottled in a prisoners world
Sounds playing through my mind
Harmonious in arrangement
Discorded in sound
Playing with no end
Hiding what is not supposed to be hidden
And then quiet from the cacophony
Perpetuity disrupted
Hidden truths
Hidden lies
All molded
Marked
Broken
They don't matter any more
Long forgotten
Never to be remembered
And then
Back to the cacophony
Sinking into previously unknown peace
Author notes
As you have guessed, this isn't about fairy tales, but enjoy nonetheless
Written October 4th, 2004
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this is beautiful, i really love it.
keep up the excellent work
also how are you lewis?
me im okay. much love...............
ttyl
sabrina -
Lewis this is beautiful and sad. It brings a feeling of unknowingness to me and I feel at peace as well as befuddled. I have missed chatting with you hope we can talk again someday. My e-mail is Reblewoutaaclue@aol.com please contact me if we are still friends. Much love
Stephanie -
Brilliant
Hiya, great write here, Can't quite explain why I like this poem so much... Hmm... It has a sort of hidden depth to it, it seems hidden because at first read this poem is quite confusing. Maybe that's why I like it so much, you write how I like to write
Confuse people so they can rarely understand what I mean in my poems lol! (But then my friends start demanding what my poems mean so I end up having to tell them anywayz lol)Anywayz, again great write! Keep it up. Take care
~Katt~
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hey icefire, i like this poem it calmed me down alot, it just brings peacefulness into my mind, it's a great poem...
mysti
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