Fall leaves
Dance gracefully
In the breath of God's wind
Colors hold final memories
Priceless
By Sherry Finley October 2-2004
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Written October 4th, 2004
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Thank you Artis glad you enjoyed it. Sherry
Edited on Jun 05, 5:10 p.m. because ''. -
even the cast off bits of pastel orange and yellow and red, natures coat of many colors, warm the soul in the chilly fall as they prance in the sun's beam and settle like a quilt over the frosted mother earth...lovely write...Artis
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Thank you for your most lovely comment on this Charishma I like this form.... Sherry
Edited on Feb 27, 2:40 because ''. -
Colourful and Pretty!
WOW! This is one of the best cinquain I have read till date. This is beautiful in it's feel, image, words used to bring forth the image, title and the syllables also fit perfectly on this 2-4-6-8-2 form of a simple cinquain. L3 is a breathtakingly beautiful line. I enjoyed this so much! The background is gorgeous as well. Fall is just so beautiful
Charishma -
Well lets go dear sis lets go jump in some leaves ((Hugs))Thank you gosh you have been busy....what a blessing see you have taken some time out to read so many today. I'm just waking up thanks so much
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mmmmm my favorite time of year....of course here in florida the palms dont go a changin lol... reminds me of home (NH)
I want to go jump in that big pile now
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Thank you so much Bill,
These are my favorite forms, I liked yours The Child Within tonight very lovely read...Reflects attitude and thinking and that being a lift from life sometimes....to dream and reflect on the good as children do.......Sherry
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sometimes images reveal their full beauty
is only for a moment...
but in that moment
hope springs eternal!
I did enjoy this very much!
Keep penning on one stroke at a time!
Bill -
Thank you so much least one turned out ok huh Love U
Me (((((((Aunt Cookie))))))
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Very VERY good, Sherry.....really crisp and airy as the theme
an oopsie in spelling gracefully
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Thanks dear one we need to put another on eachother's favorites I'm going to on mine right now. I like doing these forms they easier for me
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Sherry, this is really a very beautiful cianquain! Loved the image in it, well done girl!
Kisses and love,
Mari
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Thanks Don ((((((((((((Hugs)))))))))))))))))))))
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Thank you Gramps thank you!!!!
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Thank you dearest thank you so much Love and hugs,Sherry
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Very nicely done cinquain..I enjoyed the read!
Maureen
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Sherry.Beautiful.Gramps
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This has a wonderful, easy feel to it. Nice work.
Don
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