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Fade

let it all fade
fade to gray
fade to gray, if you stay.

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Written October 4th, 2004

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  • Onfire4Jesus
    February 21, 2005
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    This is very beautiful!! I loved the imagery!! It was just so wonderful!! So perfect. This is truly magnificent!! God Bless You my friend!!

  • Arianna
    December 30, 2004
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    ...blue gray is also called cadet blue. If you look at a Blue color wheel, cadet blue is considered darkish gray or light blue.

    Cadet blue looks both colors. It depends on how you see things, though.

    http://images.google.com/images?svnum=20&hl=en&lr=lang_en&q=cadet+blue


  • Amanda21
    December 30, 2004
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    wow... this is really deep... its sad too... sheesh, i dont know exactly what you mean though... i mean why would it turn gray? wouldnt it turn blue? id ont get it... oh well... maybe im thinking too much! haha anyways... nice write!!! I liked it either way -Amanda Jo-