and it's raining again
and here i am once more
staring out onto the grey depths
of eternity
From your kitchen window
sipping hot chocolate
but sometimes we'll just be sitting
on your couch and you'll be singing
and I'll have my guitar
and I'll be playing some little thing
the cat will be curled up between us
and it won't matter that i don't know
how to play one single song
and you couldn't sing to save your life
and it won't matter that it's 10 o clock
or that we're both playing hookey
It'll just be you and me
here on your couch
wasting the day away with
your cat and my guitar
And it won't matter that
it's raining again
Author notes
not sure where this came from,kinda smaltzy i guess, i dunno but i had to get it down fast before my comp spazzes out.
Written October 4th, 2004
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ok so i guess what makes me really like it is it seems like someone talking. nothing fancy, just this is how it is, kinda like im telling me story, take it or leave it.
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that is so awesome, i really love it. its one of my favorite things that youve written. probably one of my favorite poems in general. great job! keep writing:-) *luvs
^^i know i said id critique but really i have nothing to critique. dont change a thing. i like it more each time i read it. -
i love it. 'nuff said.
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