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Uva

The Academical Village.
Hallowed halls of learning
Laid out by the framers of liberty
Are defaced by segregation.
Official attempts at diversity
Can't hide the hate within.
A racial slur left on a car
A hateful damning threat.
Rich, white, old money legacy
Excludes the rest of us.
And black, or poor, or different,
Can't hope to escape scorn.
Until the high and lofty goals
That Jefferson laid out
Are met to meld communities,
We'll fight for our lost pride.

Author notes

Last month, a racial slur was scrawled on a black student's car.  The student was an upstanding, important member of the student body who lived on the Lawn, a great honor for fourth-year students.  The President of the University has failed to respond, and various student organizations have done so slowly.
Written October 4th, 2004

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  • SpikeyThePunker
    March 11, 2005
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    thats really fucking sad that someone is so cruel. this was an awesome poem. keep it up.

  • Cleopatra
    February 7, 2005
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    Reading things like this makes me happy that I grew up in a small town in Canada.
    This shit didn’t happen to us.


  • Aspirin Lullaby
    November 23, 2004
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    Thats sad that people are low enough to do that.

    Great write.

    -Addy

  • Bristol 1st sgt
    October 20, 2004
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    good poem...nicely done kinda hard to make a story into a poem well done


  • Meaka
    October 6, 2004
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    Perfect style with subtle "rhyming" beats. And good point.


  • P0TE is Dead
    October 5, 2004
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    GUILTY

    i say we kill the son of a bitch that did this..... fucking idiots need to stop being so damn ignorant..... i love you becky!

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