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Deep in the shadows

Deep in the shadows
Where my pain lies
Imprisoned by my fear
Of always being alone

There lies a hope a finding you
A small candle in my cell
I am changed, will you see me?
Worn down and bedraggled, will you recognize me?



{I'm wide awake
Only to find that I've slept through
All my tears from what I thought
Was merely a dream

That face in the mirror
Doesn't resemble me
The way I left
Who have I become?}

When death does come
Will you be there to hold my hand?
But you can't sing me to sleep forever
If I can't find you



{I'm wide awake
Only to find that I've slept through
All my tears from what I thought
Was merely a dream

That face in the mirror
Doesn't resemble me
The way I left
Who have I become?}

Author notes


Written October 4th, 2004

A contest entry

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  • Walking Wounded
    January 11, 2005
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    Unfortunately, I'm unsure if you read the rules, as this wasn't a rhyming song, as far as I could see. Sorry.


  • Basts Siren
    December 12, 2004
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    Awesome... parts of it sound like something I might write...