Deep in the shadows
Where my pain lies
Imprisoned by my fear
Of always being alone
There lies a hope a finding you
A small candle in my cell
I am changed, will you see me?
Worn down and bedraggled, will you recognize me?
{I'm wide awake
Only to find that I've slept through
All my tears from what I thought
Was merely a dream
That face in the mirror
Doesn't resemble me
The way I left
Who have I become?}
When death does come
Will you be there to hold my hand?
But you can't sing me to sleep forever
If I can't find you
{I'm wide awake
Only to find that I've slept through
All my tears from what I thought
Was merely a dream
That face in the mirror
Doesn't resemble me
The way I left
Who have I become?}
Author notes
Written October 4th, 2004
A contest entry
- Lyrical Finesse by Walking Wounded.
522 points, ended January 15, 2005, 14 entries
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Comments
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Unfortunately, I'm unsure if you read the rules, as this wasn't a rhyming song, as far as I could see. Sorry.
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Awesome... parts of it sound like something I might write...


