A touch from your lips is so electrifying
The energy courses through my veins
And energizes my soul
Your cheek is like a butterfly's wings
Displaying such wonderful colours as they are spread wide open
So soft, smooth, and silky, when pressed against mine
As we kiss
My heart races with excitement and passion
At this moment nothing else matters
When you look into my eyes
Yours shine brighter than a star and sparkle more than a diamond
And they pierce into my soul and touch me to my core
I know I can live without many things
But I cannot live without your touch
Because of the love I hold for you
Author notes
Written October 3rd, 2002
In a list
A contest entry
- Happiness is being in love...1 day contest by jezz-aussi.
300 points, ended January 17, 2006, 28 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
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Sigh
This is so beautiful and heartfelt. This truly comes from somewhere deep within. The way you describe her shows the magnitude of the love you have for her. The last lines are my favorites. This is so full of love, it makes me sigh and wish we could all have this. Well done.
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Awww,
Another wonderful write! I could read these all day.Your words were so sweet and sensual in this poem.True meaning for the one loved.Enjoyed. -
Simply lovely and makes me sigh!!!
A beautiful tender poem you have penned Edward. Like so many of your poems this is beautiful and full of loving feelings. I have been reading your poems today with many thoughts. I will always enjoy your poetry. Sandy
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This is gorgeous, its so pure and beautiful... Love is such bliss, it is so hard to capture in words, but you have succeeded in that.
Things to fix:
"And they pierce into my soul and touches me to my core"
This line the 'touches' should be 'touch'...
This is wonderful!
-shirley-
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Oh my friend another wonderful Romantic write.SIGH!!!!!!!!!!!
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"I know I can live without many things
But I cannot live without your touch"
Those are such beautiful lines. I just melt at the thought of them.
Yet another lovely poem have you entered into my contest, to make me smile, and to make judging that much tougher! lol
Thank you again for entering.
Love and light,
Jenna -
I really like the description that the cheeks are butterfly wings, you really bring beautiful and divine images to my mind. Thank you for sharing
Sister Wolf Rikku -
BEAUTIFUL AN D HEARTFELT POEM
Simply beautiful. The words you chose were so poetic. Any woman would love to have their husband or boyfriend write this for them. . This was so romantic, takes me back to my younger days. Thank you for sharing this wonderful poem. Take care, Sandy
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So beautiful Ed, the touch is one of the senses that is needed when you love someone, to touch their face, their lips in a kiss, to caress their back, holding hands, all these are important, everyone needs to be touched. You have such a wonderful soul my friend, keep on writing your beautiful poems-Jenn
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aww its so cute! your imagery is like nuthing ive seen be4 im luvin it keep up the good work imagery defintly is your strong point so stick to it keep up the good work love ya chelle
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Bravo!!!
A breathless whisper of undying Love, my Friend...a soft sigh of such Passion ~ such glorious Dream...this is POETRY, my learned Friend...such admiration I hold for your words... 
Wanda
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Nicolette,
I wish I could tell you how special you are.. your words and comments touch me in a special way.. but I want to tank you with my heart for your kindness. -
Touch of love...
So gentle and sweet - written with the ink of love; the soft chalk of the heart; pulled from deep-deep within! What is more beautiful than when two souls touch and are wrapped around each other! Love changes everything - in the end we are only LOVE....you have such a gentle, honest way of writing about your love - very adorable, my friend!
Nicolette
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