Orange Sunshine
I hope that you will pick me,
then squeeze me oh so tight,
you'll get my juices flowing,
to drink at mornings light.
Sunshine makes me sweeter,
I just hang around all day,
in my orange round container,
as the branches gently sway.
Mixed with some Russian vodka,
stir me with some smooth gin,
wow,another tequila sunrise,
now your head begins to spin.
I'm your sunshine in the morning,
your first choice for vitamin C,
my flavor is made naturally,
my blossoms fragrant the tree.
I am natures call to breakfast,
drinking sunshine with each sip,
enjoy the taste of orange juice,
as the glass presses to your lip.
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Written October 3rd, 2004
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Great write. Orange juice is so refreshing drink.
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A great beautiful poem.
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LOL, hee hee this was very cute. I think I would be a lemon, only because I would love to see the look on the face of those who drank me without knowing,,,LOL very cute.
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Thank you for reading and commenting on my poem. It is always appreciated. Take cae, Sandy
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Orange juice. Never would have thought it. But how are YOU like orange juice? Bright and bubbly in the mornings? lol
This was really good and I enjoyed the rhyming of it. I'm a fan of rhyme and this didn't seem forced at all
Good luck in the contest
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I love it squeezed right from the orangss. Thank you for reading and commenting on my poem. It is most appreciated. Take care, Sandy
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OMG!!! this is definately my favorite i love ORANGE JUICE
it is so great. but i dont like that artificially flavored crap it tastes like shit! i love this one.
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Joyus -
Thank you for taking the time to read my poem and leave a nice comment. It is appreciated. This was a great contest. Take care, Sandy
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well my lil'sis tiff would love to be this drink!!! orange juice is her favorite! i like it once in a while and after reading that i really want some!!! this was a great write. thanks for entering our contest and good luck.
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Thank you tiffany for the nice comment. It is appreciated. Take care, Sandy
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this is really cool i like this alot well good luck
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Thank you for taking the time to read and comment on my poem. It is appreciated. Take care, Sandy
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i love this..i am your sunshine in the morning...too cute...and that you can be mixed up with other stuff and still be wonderful is a clever way to say you are very versatile! hehehehe...i so enjoyed reading this very cute write
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Thanks so much for taking the time to read my poem and comment om it. Take care, Sandy
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Thanks for the comment, I know my oldest son would agree with you. Anytime is the right time.
I appreciate your taking the time to read my poem. 
Take care, Sandy
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Hi Linzui, I'm glad you liked the kitty. I knew that would make you smile. My sister is like me, always sending silly things in the mail.Thanks for the nice comment. Take care, Love , Grandmom
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You make me want orange juice even when my tummy doesn't do well with it! I love the refreshing taste and the quick bursts of energy from OJ; of course, "low acid" orange juice otherwise I am in for heartburn and have to chase it with a half gallon of milk and a bottle of Tums.
Great write, thanks for entering and best wishes... ~genielassie~
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mmmm sounds good to me, lol don't people say you shouldn't drink so early though me i will drink any time of the day.
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wow grandma that was really good.... it was so0o0o0o cute... i loved it!!! gr8 write... they always are....
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Thank you Bambie for taking the time to read my poem and comment on it. I appreciate it. Take care, Sandy
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This is a cute little jot..I like the idea that you can mix OJ with anything and it will taste like a treat..lol Great Job!!
Thanks for entering and the best of luck in our contest...
Much love
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Yea I haven't had a tequils sunrise in a while. Some days after being on here, I could use one. Talk to you later Laura. Take care, Sandy
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I hope you enjoyed your orange juice. No vodka I hope. Thanks for the really nice comments. Take care, Sandy
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what a wonderfully creative poem. You did a wonderful job I agree with purple rose you didn't miss a beat on any of the stanza's me I prefer tequila sunrise lol...GOD BLESS AND TAKE CARE LAURA
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I love orange juice! This is a fantastic poem, your ryhming is wonderful and flows very nicely! I loved every stanza, this poem is wonderful! I think I'll go have some orange juice... . This is a fantastic piece, my friend, great job!
Purplerose
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